Show, don't tell.

WALT: show, don’t tell when describing.

Remember to:

show by writing about:

• what it looks like
• what it tastes like
• what it smells like
• how you felt (feelings)

Activity - Choose your favourite food. Write a few sentences describing it to us by showing not telling.

I so exited when the hot delicious little pieces of goodness went into my mouth. I couldn't believe the taste of the little pieces of goodness. I would be warm, playing Xbox as well as eating small delights. I could have fries with it aswell. in hours i finished eating them because I savoured every single crump. It smelt like heaven...

Maori language week

Maori language week bro

Poor boy!

WALT: write an opinion

Remember to:

• describe what you see (explain the photo)

I think this photo is about

I think…. because….

• Include personal feelings

This photo makes me feel…..

• explain how this boy could inspire you this term.

This term I will….

So… a boy outside in the cold, doing homework at 9:00pm. And he's outside Mcdonalds. Come on, it was already weird (and sad) enough. He’s probably not homeless, but he definitely doesn't have electricity. I totally feel I should give poor people like that money. So, this term, I will give money to the poor.  He has inspired me with my learning. I will try to do more homework, and do even more homework at my grade. sometimes. And this is all going to be part of my learning Journey!

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