Show, don't tell.

WALT: show, don’t tell when describing.

Remember to:

show by writing about:

• what it looks like
• what it tastes like
• what it smells like
• how you felt (feelings)

Activity - Choose your favourite food. Write a few sentences describing it to us by showing not telling.

I so exited when the hot delicious little pieces of goodness went into my mouth. I couldn't believe the taste of the little pieces of goodness. I would be warm, playing Xbox as well as eating small delights. I could have fries with it aswell. in hours i finished eating them because I savoured every single crump. It smelt like heaven...